Good job.

- try not to arch your back so much on the fouettes and on the landing - decide BEFORE you do the combination how many pirouette turns you're going to do coming out of the fouettes so that you can stick it - try to think about turning your leg out when it is in 2nd in your turns (it's tough) - use your arms to help you; not hinder you -- support them and use them to help you get around - try to fully stretch your supporting leg on the turns - on landing: lower supporting heel first, then the leg

watch your hands and your landing-it was a little noisy. other than that, good