u have got BEAUTIFUL feet and legs..awesome technique and you've got good movement quality..i would work on your facial expressions and keep them appropriate for the emotion of the song and dance. also work on keeping your shoulders pressed down when you spot your turns and keep your chin up! i liked parts of the choreography but i felt that it was somewhat repetative. u need movements that will highlight your attributes more. other than that overall you've got amazing talent and ur a natural!