i see you're a lefty... everything you did, especially your battments, was catered to the left side. be sure to use both your right and left; people will be awfully impressed to see a versatile dancer... toward the end, when you were downstage on stage left, your emotions seemed a bit contrived... just work on really feeling what's there... you have it... other than that, great job!

finally a competition dancer with some passion. Be sure to relax your sholders and to not flick your wrists. on the fast parts, look calm, it will make the dance look effortless. love the music!